Adrian Velazquez
Ms. Lehmann
English 1-1A
14 February 2020
Where to go?
I’m in my house it’s about eight forty and I wanted to watch some Netflix, so I start walking to my bed thinking I'll sit in my bed for hours because I don’t have schoo tomorrow. So,I start watching some showsand movies while eating my favorite ice-cream. But I watch so much end up falling asleep but when I wake,I’m not in my house anymore, I open my eyes on the floor in the middle of a very dark room with one single light in the distance. I start walking towards it because the light is the only thing you can see out of all around me. I’m walking what it seems like forever, on the other side of the light in front of me. I see a dark figure with a long robe just standing there just staring. I was so desperate for someone to help I started sprinting towards him ittook a while to get to him but eventually I got to the dark mysterious person.
I walked towards the figure and they said ‘’You’re early” with a hint of surprise. I said early for what he walked towards the light and said “For your end” my heart felt like it had gotten ripped out of my chest.I started thinking about a million things I started panicking, so I turned around and started running as fast as I couldbut it was like I was on a treadmillrunning but not going anywhere. He started telling stop running you won’t leave to the above your gone. I turned and asked “the above” he started explainto me that the above was earth, that I was being decided on wear to go. Either Heaven or Hell that he will stare into my eyes and see all the good and all the bad I did in my life to see where I belong.
While he was looking, I wondered why did he seem so surprised when he saw me, he said that he didn’t expect to see me so early, I started thinking aren’t you the one whodecides when I die. He responded that’s what minions are for, minions I said he told me that he sends out demons that are disguised as owls. They decide who lives and who dies every time you hear an owl that means they just brought me a soul. I do remember hearing an owl in the distancebut I just thought it was anormal animal outside.But it turned out that it wasn’t and that I would go to sleep and never wake up again.
In Conclusion,sohe told me that he had decided that I would go to heaven because I had done many things in many things in my life but that he saw more good than bad so he told me that I would be sent up tobe free and live my life in heaven.
Student’s Choice Reflection
Please answer all questions in complete, grammatically correct sentences.
1. Explain the process you went through to write this paper. Please be specific.I had to think about what I was going to write about and think if it was interesting enough to be a story.
2. Is this paper narrative, expository, or argumentative? How do you know?I think it's an expository because it is telling a story it tells you everything.
3. Tell me one thing you learned from writing this paper.
I learned that I can come up with some stories that may be weird but I like how they end up.
4. What are you particularly proud of in this paper?I'm proud that was able to come up with a story because I'm not very creative and usually can't come up with anything.
5. What does this paper show readers about you?
It shows them that I'm very weird and that I like ghosts and demons and all that weird stuff.